Sunday, April 12, 2009

MY MISTAKES

# Yemen location:
I wrote (in the same time, Yemen located ….)
The correct sentence is [at the same time, Yemen located]
#The biggest mosque in Middle East
I wrote (this mosque costed more than…)
Costed * is wrong because cost in the past is cost*
Also, I wrote (the students live on the mosque)
The correct sentence is [the students live in the mosque]
#Saint Patrick’s Day :
I did not clarify most of the information, so I will edit it again as soon as possible.
#Yemen wedding style :-
I wrote (the Yemeni people has the ...) (village wedding) (city wedding)
The correct sentences are [the Yemeni people have the….] [village’s wedding] [city’s wedding]
#Clone:
My mistakes (….cloning is dolly cheep) (issue has generated…)(mony people )
The correct sentences are [cloning is the dolly cheep][this issue has generated ][many people]
Thank you, I really like this class because I have learned a lot.
Once again thank you.

1 comment:

  1. Good, I am glad that you like this class. Don't forget that Dolly is a sheep--not a cheep! ;-)

    You are doing very well, and I am very proud of you! Have you been working hard this weekend?

    --Kristi

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